Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Arguemental Essay- Kony 2012

Imagin these things Someone comes to you home and took you somewhere. Someone hurts your face in any way. This things would be terrible if it happens. You would just be in somewhere you don;t know and hurt on your face This things might hear like an one part of scary horror movies or a fantasy books. But this was really happened in Africa. The kids in Africa were just kidnapped and had to do something terrible. Who made this horrible things happen? It was Joseph Kony. Joseph Kony kidnappedthe kids and used them for his army. I'm writing this because there is a campaign called 'Kony 2012'. ' Kony 2012 ' is a campaign making Kony famous so many people all around can know who is Kony. But there are some arguements about this. Some people think they have to help, but somebody says thet this is not good because there are no exact informations to proove. However, I think we should help them.
  I have some reasons why we have to help the African kids from Kony. First, the kids suffered alot from Kony. Some people says that we can't help them because they could already finished to make kids hurt and make in army or Kony could already be dead. But, we have to help them right now because the kids could be suffering right now. There's a possibility. We should help them before they get more suffered by Kony. The kids wouldn't know that killing people and other things are actually bad.
  Next reason we have to help the kids in Africa is because many people could die because of Kony. The kids in Kony army could die because Kony will kiil the kids if they don't follow his directions. This is more serious than other people dies from Kony because the others people could be protected by the government. But the kids in Kony's army could not get help or couldn't escape. If they triys to escape, Kony will kiill that kid. They have no powers to fight with Kony either.
  Finally, it's not hard to help them. Many people dosen't with kony 2012 because they don't know exactly where the money is using for if the people donate money. The only information they know about the donated money is that the 30% of the dinated money is being used for the African kids and the other 70% of the money is used in making movies, posters, and other things to make Kony famous. But there are many easy ways to help the Kony 2012, too. You don;t have too donate the money if you can't trust them. You can just add friend in your facebooks and tell your friends about Kony. This could make Kony famous. Actually, Kony 2012's goal is to make Kony famous.
  People will think that it's a nightmare or just think as a movie if I tell them about Kony. We have to help the African kids right now. We can't just leave them in danger. There could be many peple dying because of Kony. We can just help them in easy ways! It will help them and they can achieve the goal of Kony 2012. But as some people says about kony, we don't know what they do with the donated money. Kony 2012 have to show the exact information so the peple can trust and donate more money and help more. If Kony 2012 fix some problems, we can help them and make Kony stop the bad things.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Ricky. You have a very good writing style to hook readers in the introduction. You also have solid arguments to support your opinion. However, I see some spelling and grammar errors that could be avoided easily. Try using Microsoft Word grammar check.

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  2. It was a fantastic! essay!!! You can put videos about Kony.

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